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Elven love
« : 07 Decembrie, 2004, 12:58:09 pm »
Within the darkest forest
And past the mountains and the tempest
I find my love killed in the flowers
My weapon falls, i'm without powers
I run to her only to find
A souless body,cold and blind,
A shadow of what once she was
And cry my heart is all it does
For elf she was,imortal soul
And me a mortal, just a foul,
And all i felt for her is true
I kiss the eyes once blue,
And take the body in my arms
I will protect against all harms
And take it to the Elfs to burry
Depp in the wood once green and merry,
6 feet beneth the ground,
Her gorgeus body will be found
And at her side my love for her

I hear the elven quire sing
For you my love, they cry within,
And stare at you, and can't belive
And think about the life i'l live
In darkness roaming and in lie
Without you here my soul will die,
No longer for the truth i'l fight,
No longer my eyes see the light,
The demons will take all my mind,
And i'l be cold as you and blind
To love, compasion and desire
Within my soul there's no more fire
I'l keep on walkin` all alone
And be as cold as a big stone.
To love is to die, but it's not worth living!

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« Răspuns #1 : 07 Decembrie, 2004, 09:35:16 pm »
Superb! Keep on writing! We are reading! And we really like it!

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Re: Elven love
« Răspuns #2 : 13 Ianuarie, 2006, 04:50:33 pm »
:) 10x
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« Răspuns #3 : 14 Ianuarie, 2006, 01:27:45 pm »
   it`s really great .. i love your poems ..  :-*
daca iti pun un nor in suflet o sa iubesti mai mult cerul?

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Re: Elven love
« Răspuns #4 : 08 Februarie, 2006, 11:26:40 pm »
"Beauty slept and angels wept
For Her immortal soul
In this response, all evil chose
To claim her for their very own"
Mirrors of mourning, nothing else
Blinded by grief they are...everyone
Awaitin' your final way
Watchin' the frozen pit and see
We've lost reality

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Re: Elven love
« Răspuns #5 : 03 Martie, 2006, 12:36:29 pm »
The poem makes me recall some of the romantics who felt like the poet of Eleven Love. Very fine.
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Re: Elven love
« Răspuns #6 : 25 Martie, 2006, 02:14:22 pm »
Wow that was beautiful!  *stunned and amazed*
I, the great Payton will colour the world with crayola green crayons =)

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Re: Elven love
« Răspuns #7 : 17 Aprilie, 2006, 04:30:52 pm »
well i was kinda sad when i wrote it, and it some how reflects what i felt when i lost somone...
hope i didn't depress u too much
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Re: Elven love
« Răspuns #8 : 01 Decembrie, 2006, 06:26:17 pm »
Greatttttttttttttt!!!!!!!
I know I need you
I want you to
Be free of all the pain
You hold inside

 

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