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English discussion room => Poetry => Subiect creat de: BlueBerry din 31 Ianuarie, 2005, 03:35:44 p.m.

Titlu: Lonely Without Ya..
Scris de: BlueBerry din 31 Ianuarie, 2005, 03:35:44 p.m.

Here is the first postin' for me in this forum and it is a poem i've written..

Lonely WithOut You

Every Moment passes
My memory flashes
With sweet thoughts
Of you and I

You were filling my day
With laugh and beauty

I feel the Love
Every time you fix your eyes on me
I feel the tenderness
With your gentle touches on my skin
I feel the joy
Whenever your giggles come to my ears
I feel the safety
Each time I lay my head on your shoulder

But now
When all is gone
I feel lonely
And all what remains is the
Scent of You

Waiting to hear ur replys :)

lOve'
BlueBerry

Titlu: Re: Lonely Without Ya..
Scris de: yasmeen07 din 04 Martie, 2005, 12:31:05 p.m.

well you were waiting for someones reply! :P so here you go... I think your poem is absoloutley wonderful! I hope I could write a poem like that one day! ::) hehe!!
Keep it up! :)

Titlu: Re: Lonely Without Ya..
Scris de: Carmen23 din 10 Martie, 2005, 11:29:20 p.m.

I think your poem is abosulutely fabulous as well!  Keep it up ;D