10 Octombrie, 2025, 07:57:30 p.m.
Totul despre Iubire

Autor Subiect: Elven love  (Citit de 11229 ori)

0 Membri și 1 Vizitator vizualizează acest subiect.

07 Decembrie, 2004, 12:58:09 p.m.
Citit de 11229 ori
Offline

Cross


Within the darkest forest
And past the mountains and the tempest
I find my love killed in the flowers
My weapon falls, i'm without powers
I run to her only to find
A souless body,cold and blind,
A shadow of what once she was
And cry my heart is all it does
For elf she was,imortal soul
And me a mortal, just a foul,
And all i felt for her is true
I kiss the eyes once blue,
And take the body in my arms
I will protect against all harms
And take it to the Elfs to burry
Depp in the wood once green and merry,
6 feet beneth the ground,
Her gorgeus body will be found
And at her side my love for her

I hear the elven quire sing
For you my love, they cry within,
And stare at you, and can't belive
And think about the life i'l live
In darkness roaming and in lie
Without you here my soul will die,
No longer for the truth i'l fight,
No longer my eyes see the light,
The demons will take all my mind,
And i'l be cold as you and blind
To love, compasion and desire
Within my soul there's no more fire
I'l keep on walkin` all alone
And be as cold as a big stone.
To love is to die, but it's not worth living!

07 Decembrie, 2004, 09:35:16 p.m.
Răspuns #1

DIANA

Vizitator
Superb! Keep on writing! We are reading! And we really like it!

13 Ianuarie, 2006, 04:50:33 p.m.
Răspuns #2
Offline

Cross


To love is to die, but it's not worth living!

14 Ianuarie, 2006, 01:27:45 p.m.
Răspuns #3
Offline

Strumfita


   it`s really great .. i love your poems ..  :-*
daca iti pun un nor in suflet o sa iubesti mai mult cerul?

08 Februarie, 2006, 11:26:40 p.m.
Răspuns #4
Offline

kuk


"Beauty slept and angels wept
For Her immortal soul
In this response, all evil chose
To claim her for their very own"
Mirrors of mourning, nothing else
Blinded by grief they are...everyone
Awaitin' your final way
Watchin' the frozen pit and see
We've lost reality

03 Martie, 2006, 12:36:29 p.m.
Răspuns #5
Offline

rksingh


The poem makes me recall some of the romantics who felt like the poet of Eleven Love. Very fine.
R K
R.K.Singh

25 Martie, 2006, 02:14:22 p.m.
Răspuns #6
Offline

Payton


Wow that was beautiful!  *stunned and amazed*
I, the great Payton will colour the world with crayola green crayons =)

17 Aprilie, 2006, 05:30:52 p.m.
Răspuns #7
Offline

Cross


well i was kinda sad when i wrote it, and it some how reflects what i felt when i lost somone...
hope i didn't depress u too much
To love is to die, but it's not worth living!

01 Decembrie, 2006, 06:26:17 p.m.
Răspuns #8
Offline

burn_2_hell


Greatttttttttttttt!!!!!!!
I know I need you
I want you to
Be free of all the pain
You hold inside