Lonely Without Ya..

[BlueBerry]

Here is the first postin' for me in this forum and it is a poem i've written..

Lonely WithOut You

Every Moment passes
My memory flashes
With sweet thoughts
Of you and I

You were filling my day
With laugh and beauty

I feel the Love
Every time you fix your eyes on me
I feel the tenderness
With your gentle touches on my skin
I feel the joy
Whenever your giggles come to my ears
I feel the safety
Each time I lay my head on your shoulder

But now
When all is gone
I feel lonely
And all what remains is the
Scent of You

Waiting to hear ur replys

lOve'
BlueBerry

[yasmeen07]

well you were waiting for someones reply! so here you go... I think your poem is absoloutley wonderful! I hope I could write a poem like that one day! hehe!!
Keep it up!

[Carmen23]

I think your poem is abosulutely fabulous as well!  Keep it up